Wednesday, September 28, 2016

Reader's Response Draft

In this article, (This Self-Proclaimed Micronation Has Plans for a Car-Free, Algae-Powered City),
Adele Peters (2016) stated the idea of soi-disant “micronation” located on a small piece of land between Croatia and Serbia, known as “Free Republic of Liberland”, operating without automobiles and driven by algae had been idealized by a committee of libertarians. The writer also mentioned that in order to tackle the issue of land scarcity, an architectural plan which involves the layering of the city’s neighborhood while the city expands has been established.

The article explains the concepts of algae powering the city by covering the bottom of each neighborhood platform with genetically altered algae, of which can be used for power. Also, in order to achieve the status of zero vehicle nation, as well as to reduce pollution, buildings are clustered around transits to allow the accessibility of the different parts of the city by foot. In addition to ensure the sustainability and the functionality of this green city, economists are engaged to promote entrepreneurship through crowd funding. However, Adele Peters’s only stated the advantages of going green in the city but failed to look into the effectiveness, which makes the article incomplete.

In the article, the writer mentioned the benefits of having algae powered city which only requires the underside of each platform to be covered with algae that does not require sunlight to grow, not affecting daily life. But in all cases, if there’s a pros there must a cons. Adele’s failed to state the underlying disadvantages in this aspect which led to incompletion of the article. It is mentioned that the two main support for algae growth are phosphorus and nitrogen (Environmental Protection Agency, ND). In order to support a city worth of electricity, a large amount of algae are needed and according to Patrick Déry (2007), phosphorus is a very special nonrenewable resources and will runs out approximately 50 to 150 years from now and this will be a trouble when it reaches its production peak as it becomes harder to extract and getting more expensive. Thus this might make one questioned about the sustainability of the city. It may be doable in a short run, but if it runs out of resources to produced algae, the city will not be able to function.

In addition, algae are needed to be grown in controlled temperature conditions and with a considerable amount of land and water. (RP Siegel, 2012) this led to the failure of mentioning the how the architectural are going to tackled this situation by Adele. Furthermore researched had shown that if algae are not carefully handled and results in algae bloom, it will cause water pollution and can be harmful to humans if they consume affect water and fish. (Environmental Protection Agency, ND).

In conclusion, although Adele Peters had discusses certain valid point regarding how Liberland is going to achieve their green micronation, her article is incomplete due to the incomprehensive analysis on the potential setbacks of having algae driven city. She should had discussed on the setbacks and the ways to counter the situations to prevent readers doubt the functionality and the sustainability of the city.

References
Environmental Protection Agency (2016, March 1) supports for algae growth. Nutrient pollution. https://www.epa.gov/nutrientpollution/problem

Patrick Déry (2007, August 13) Phosphorus. Peak-phosphorus. http://www.resilience.org/stories/2007-08-13/peak-phosphorus#


Siegel R.P (2012, April 12) land and water. Algae Based Bio-fuelhttp://www.triplepundit.com/special/energy-options-pros-and-cons/algae-based-biofuel-pros-cons/

Wednesday, September 21, 2016

Summary of "The Self-Proclamied Micronation HAs Plans for a Car-Free, Algae-Powered City"

In this article, Adele Peters stated the idea of soi-disant “micronation” located on a small piece of land between Croatia and Serbia, known as “Free Republic of Liberland”, operating without automobiles and driven by algae had been idealised by a committee of libertarians. The writer also mentioned that in order to tackle the issue of land scarcity, an architectural plan which involves the layering of the city’s neighbourhood while the city expands has been established. The article explains the concepts of algae powering the city by covering the bottom of each neighbourhood platform with genetically altered algae, of which can be used for power. Also, in order to achieve the status of zero vehicle nation, as well as to reduce pollution, buildings are clustered around transits to allow the accessibility of the different parts of the city by foot. In addition to ensure the sustainability and the functionality of this green city, economists are engaged to promote entrepreneurship through crowd funding.

Tuesday, September 13, 2016

My English Learning Journey

English language was introduced to me for as long as I can remember. As a child from Mandarin speaking family, English was not really utilized in my daily life before I began school. As Singapore is a multi-racial country, English had become a common language for everyone to converse in. Thus, I always find it a struggle to communicate with my friends or even to understand what the teacher’s teach in class. This had made me felt inferior compared to others, thinking why and how are they able to do it so effortlessly.

However, this does not prevent me in improving the language that I am weak in. I started to think of ways such as reading more books to widen the range of my vocabulary, watching more English drama and learning the difference in grammars, paying extra attention during English classes to overcome my weakness. Although over the years, I could not say that I had master this language, but at least, I could speak fluently and converse well with me teachers and peers.

English is an interesting language to me. There are so many stuff to it. Being able to converse well does not mean that u have a good ability of it. There are tons of stuff that I can still improve on my English such as learning how to structure a proper sentence, writing a formal tone of email, proposal which all will be needed once I am in the working society. I am glad that I did not give up on English even when I am weak in it previously.